Friday, February 5, 2010

My Scar

It was right after Christmas my sister and I wanted to play a board game. So I went into her closet and asked her what she wanted to play. She answered "I want to play parcheesi" so I asked her ot go inot the kitchen and get me a pair of scissors or a knife so I could open the game and we could play. She came back with a knife and when I climbed back up into the closet I had her hand me the knife only being a child she didn"t realize that she handed it to me point up and it impaled me in my hand. I didn"t even realize it happened until she started crying and i looked at my hand. I immediately pulled it out of my hand and then I started bleeding so I had my dad take me to the emergency room in order for me to get stitches.

3 comments:

  1. This could be a nice piece of flash story telling, but you need to make it a bit more dramatic!

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  2. This is very good, but I agree with Mike. Put a few more gorey and horrifying adjectives in there. Pathos!!!

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